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Post by Judgment on Jun 11, 2007 15:20:38 GMT -5
Hello and Welcome to Outlawed Freedom! We are open to all and any suggestions that you might have for our first plot! We know that we would like to have something with three kings in, so we can hold auditions for them then! We hope that you have a great time with us here at Outlawed Freedom!!!
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Post by Tassle on Jun 13, 2007 17:14:48 GMT -5
well, on my first forum our plot had 3 kings. a father and his 2 sons. in short: the father was a neutral. his elder son wanted to be a Light, and the younger wanted to be a Dark. so they all got in a fight, and the sons went their separate ways. the Dark son, who was furious at his father, decided to hurt his father as bad as he could without killing him. so the Dark killed his mother, which caused a war between the father and son. then the Light son tried to stop the fighting and eventually got pulled into the war as well.
that's the plot as short as i can get it, lol. there were a thousand smaller details, but many of them probably would only apply to the equines on my forum. so...hope that idea helps
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Post by Judgment on Jun 13, 2007 17:35:29 GMT -5
Thank You Tassle. We'll take it into concideration, and let other members post there idea before we decide! I like that idea though!
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Post by Tassle on Jun 13, 2007 17:36:41 GMT -5
kk, awesome. it's a little sketchy, and other members probably have much better ideas. lol.
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Post by BB on Jun 13, 2007 19:38:31 GMT -5
Awww, What About The Pirates Anyhow, don't know f I can think of any but I'll try
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Post by Judgment on Jun 13, 2007 19:41:20 GMT -5
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Post by .x.Leader of Lost Souls.x. on Jun 14, 2007 2:29:11 GMT -5
The Cast
Light King Myskadar
• Pronounced my-skuh-dar • 5 Years Old • Andalusian Stallion • White • Picture • Kind hearted, courageous, has a well-honed sense of justice. He loves to help others, and would go out of his way just to do so. With a clever mind, he is always prepared for any situation with a strategic plan of action. All around great Leader. • Met Seraphmoon when his herd and hers ended up at the same watering hole at the same time.
Neutral Queen Seraphmoon
• Pronounced saraf-moon • 4 Years Old • Egyptian Arabian Mare • Dapple Grey • Picture • Free-spirited and sometimes wild, she is always looking for a challenge. Unable to comply with all the rules of the Lights, and too fearful of the consequences of the Darks, she became Neutral. She will help those in need, though won't always go out of her way. On certain days, she becomes a fireball and just enjoys terrorizing things. While on other days, she is calm and collected. She knows how to manipulate, but won't unless no other option is available. • Met Myskadar when her herd and his ended up at the same watering hole at the same time. Met Ioqt while on one of her 'terror days'.
Dark King Ioqt
• Pronounced i-o-quit • 6 Years Old • Friesian Stallion • Black • Picture • A quick-witted condescending horse full of caustic retorts that either offend you slightly, or make you pup your top with anger. He isn't afraid to tell you what he really thinks. He won't hesitate to jump to a fight, though he weighs the odds beforehand. Can come off cocky and inexperienced, though that is far from the truth. He knows how to ignite your temper, and does it just for fun. Cold and rather apathetic towards most, he wouldn't stop to help you unless he was sure he would get something in return. Usually only bothers to care for the strong, leaving the weak behind. Though he is loyal to few. • Met Seraphmoon while out searching for herd members.
The Story
In The Beginning
Three foals were born on different days, of different years, at different times, in lands far apart from each other, each of different alliances. The only thing they had in common, was that their destinies were entwined.
The First Meeting
"Oh, excuse me." The stallion said, recoiling from the light impact with another horse. Looking up he immediately noticed that it was a mare. She smiled at him kindly, responding softly. "Its okay. Such things happen. I'm Seraphmoon." The dapple grey Egyptian Arabian introduced herself, taking in the White Andalusian standing before her. The stallion smiled back, nodding his head. She was beautiful. "I am Myskadar. Pleasure to meet you." A loud neigh alerted the male, and he turned his head to catch sight of his herd preparing to leave. "It seems we must part ways. I hope to see you again, Seraphmoon." The Arabian mare nodded this time, knowing that her own herd was to leave as well. "Likewise, Myskadar." The Andalusian dipped his head in farewell, and turned to lead his herd away from the watering hole. The mare staid a moment longer, watching as he raced away into the horizon. Then, rallying her band of equines, she too took off from the watering hole.
The Second Meeting
Dapple grey Egyptian Arabian suddenly tore through the once-silent clearing. Kicking her heels up into the air, she bucked hard. Muscles worked to propel her around and around, flipping her hind daggers skyward in a display of raw power. Landing hard, the mare pivoted and shot off into the forest, running as fast as her muscles would let her go. A dark sillouhette up ahead alerted her, maybe it was another clueless horse she could tease. Slowing to a prancing trot, she came into view of the black Friesian. He immediately turned his head to face the female, harks flattened in threat. "Well hello there. I'm Seraphmoon, you?" Her voice wasn't as innocent as the words which it spoke. "What would such a vixen like you, Seraphmoon, be doing out here so...alone?" He responded, giving her a mischevious look. The mare only laughed, flicking her banner to her flanks. "Aren't you going to answer my question? Or just throw more back at me?" Tossing her head from side to side, she grinned playfully. She was thoroughly enjoying this. "Ioqt." Was the simple word that the beau used to respond. He was enchanted by her beauty, and the way in which she flaunted it made it all the worse. "Ha! Was a pleasure meeting you, Ioqt. Maybe we will meet again sometime." With that, the mare turned and bolted back the way she had come, bucking every so often. The Dark stallion stood where he was, thunderstruck. She was beautiful...
The Problem
Both stags had been struck by Cupid's Arrow, falling madly in love with Seraphmoon. Each day they ordered a scout to search for her, though all turned up unsuccessful. The Light Kind, and the Dark King, both in love with the Neutral Queen. the problem, is self explanitory.
Dishing It Out
Where To Start
There are two places you can start. • At the very beginning; have people play the meetings. Then just take it from there and escalate into a war. • The middle; the meetings have already happened, and now the Dark and Light will find out that they both want Seraphmoon, and start a war over it.
How To Give Out Roles
If you do use this idea, I would like to be the one who is in charge of the plot and decides who gets what part. Of course, people will have to audition. But I am looking for very specific traits for each horse, and really only I know them well enough to judge when said traits are bull's-eyed because I was the one who created them.
The Details
Adding little details here and there is fine with me. But I would like to check them over first. I mean, I don't really want Seraphmoon to suddenly run off with a completely different stag. That would ruin the whole plot, right? But such things as the following, are acceptable; Members get to play scouts who search for Seraphmoon. Members get to play little battles between Scouting parties. Things along those lines. I would actually encourage that, as then all members would really get to participate, and not just a selecet few.
Ending Credits
The Person In Charge
As I said before, if you do use this plot, I would like to be in charge of it. This means suchs things as; • I get to decide who gets what role • I decide what details are acceptable • All ideas/influences for the plot come to me • I choose when, where, how long, and with whom skirmishes happen • I set the stage for battles, and choose what land(s) it will be in • You pretty much get it right? I'm in charge of, for lack of a better word, everything.
Requirements
All of the above, and the following; • A land created for the Light King • A land created for the Neutral Queen • A land created for the Dark King • And extra unclaimable land for the Neutral Queen to 'hide' in from time to time. • There will be more, but only if you actually decide to use the plot.
Please Note
• This plot is long-term, meaning that it will stretch over a couple weeks, maybe even a couple months. • All such ideas, names, etc. are © to moi.
This plot has been modified from its original version, it had been formatted to fit your screen.
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Post by devil on Jun 14, 2007 8:33:05 GMT -5
lol, that's creative, but wouldn't it be better if the member that won the roles got to name their own characters? I get more muse that way...xDD
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C a h o r s
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Post by C a h o r s on Jun 14, 2007 12:38:42 GMT -5
0_0... C'est parfait, Soul. Je l'aime.
Trans: Its perfect. I love it. [/blockquote]
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Post by devil on Jun 14, 2007 12:39:24 GMT -5
I've got an idea...but it needs to be put togeather...xDD
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Post by .x.Leader of Lost Souls.x. on Jun 14, 2007 12:50:46 GMT -5
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Post by BB on Jun 14, 2007 12:52:06 GMT -5
I like It
and That's sayin' somethin' because there's no pirates
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Post by C a h o r s on Jun 14, 2007 12:52:37 GMT -5
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Post by .x.Leader of Lost Souls.x. on Jun 14, 2007 13:20:59 GMT -5
-.^ you guys are so cool. I'm glad I joined this site
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Post by C a h o r s on Jun 14, 2007 13:38:30 GMT -5
I am as well. J'apprécie avoir que quelqu'un à parler à en français.
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